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His breathing next to hers, tantamount to her completeness.
She sighs in disbelief: forever after is theirs to devour.
She's lost for words,
lost in their steaming black hole of love and lust.

She seeks for similes;
he reeks for rimes.

Her touching close to his, paramount to his wholeness.
He grunts in relief: morrow, evermore is theirs to scour.
He's lost for words,
lost in their steaming black hole of love and lust.

She seeks.
He reeks.

He doesn't trip.
She doesn't flip.

While he was sleeping, she was dreaming.

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Eяin Heяoin

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Reflective, and complementing. As genuine ardor should be. The leit motif like a melody sensual and suave. Exquisite and explicit. Mutualism of hearts.
the last line reminds me of paula cole's where have all the cowboys gone. real nice, basterda.
I guess forever after is terrifying, but not within the bounds of requited love (or the fantasy of requited love).
@Red: Thanks! :)

@Nyl: I don't know any Paula Cole songs but hey, thanks for telling me. :)

@Victor: Hee, righty right! :)

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Similarly

His breathing next to hers, tantamount to her completeness.
She sighs in disbelief: forever after is theirs to devour.
She's lost for words,
lost in their steaming black hole of love and lust.

She seeks for similes;
he reeks for rimes.

Her touching close to his, paramount to his wholeness.
He grunts in relief: morrow, evermore is theirs to scour.
He's lost for words,
lost in their steaming black hole of love and lust.

She seeks.
He reeks.

He doesn't trip.
She doesn't flip.

While he was sleeping, she was dreaming.

4 comments:

  1. Reflective, and complementing. As genuine ardor should be. The leit motif like a melody sensual and suave. Exquisite and explicit. Mutualism of hearts.

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  2. the last line reminds me of paula cole's where have all the cowboys gone. real nice, basterda.

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  3. I guess forever after is terrifying, but not within the bounds of requited love (or the fantasy of requited love).

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  4. @Red: Thanks! :)

    @Nyl: I don't know any Paula Cole songs but hey, thanks for telling me. :)

    @Victor: Hee, righty right! :)

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