In retrospect:
They're finishing each other's sentences.
They're filling the gaps in each other's hands.
They're both thinking of migrating into outer space.
They're both hearing their heartbeats race.
In retrograde:
They're faking their orgasms like how pornstars do it.
But those beautiful ones are not these scornful ones.
Dissimilarities.
Fuckyou-larities.
"Isn't it ironic that titillating has the word tit in it?"
11 comments
red the mod
said...
March 19, 2010 at 1:10 AM
Beautifully succinct. As always. I like how the coined term effectively encroaches on one's awkwardness towards the act. It asserts and enforces an imagery as lurid as it is primal.
Manech
said...
March 19, 2010 at 7:16 AM
Sometimes, I like things in-your-face-ish. Like this one.
I wanted to add that titillating also has a local word in it, but that's me being too, well, cocky.
I wanted to add that titillating also has a local word in it, but that's me being too, well, cocky.
lucas
said...
March 19, 2010 at 3:20 PM
I like you :) Please let me add you on my roll... it's incredible how few sentences could mean so much.

lio
said...
March 19, 2010 at 11:54 PM
every once in a while, random bloghopping does not always equal reading all the shit pseudo-bloggers offer. it brought me to this rare find that is your blog. will be back again.
ʎonqʎʇıɔ
said...
March 22, 2010 at 2:49 AM
i was reading your post out loud with a slight smile on my face. it's so sexy. very tori amos leather-era. lol
VICTOR
said...
March 24, 2010 at 4:32 AM
The act can be so tedious it's almost just what Hornby calls... "button-pushing."
Beautifully succinct. As always. I like how the coined term effectively encroaches on one's awkwardness towards the act. It asserts and enforces an imagery as lurid as it is primal.
ReplyDeleteSometimes, I like things in-your-face-ish. Like this one.
ReplyDeleteI wanted to add that titillating also has a local word in it, but that's me being too, well, cocky.
@Red:
ReplyDeleteIt always make me giddy when you leave beautiful remarks on my posts. It makes my posts sound beautiful also. Hehe.
@Manech:
Haha, I also posted the last sentence on my facebook status and a couple of friends couldn't help being cocky and they commented the local word under my status.
*The titillating sentence came from That '70s Show's Fez, by the way. :)
Typo: @Red: It always makes* ...
ReplyDelete(I suck!)
I like you :) Please let me add you on my roll... it's incredible how few sentences could mean so much.
ReplyDelete@Lucas:
ReplyDeleteHi! Sure, no problem, that would be wow.
every once in a while, random bloghopping does not always equal reading all the shit pseudo-bloggers offer. it brought me to this rare find that is your blog. will be back again.
ReplyDelete@Lio:
ReplyDeleteYay, my pleasure to entertain you. Drop by anytime! :)
i was reading your post out loud with a slight smile on my face. it's so sexy. very tori amos leather-era. lol
ReplyDeleteThe act can be so tedious it's almost just what Hornby calls... "button-pushing."
ReplyDelete@Nyl: Again, I don't know any song by Tori Amos, ahehe. But I like female-fronted acts so yea. Thanks! :)
ReplyDelete@Victor: Hmm... yes, tedious, it can really be.