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Vice Versa, Almost

Murdered toes with calloused brows
Calloused toes with murdered brows

Threatening dildos
amidst
Hypertonic coitus

A conniving flapper
against
A pleasure seeker

Putrid pills after spoiled syrup
Spoiled days after putrid nights

Coughing, vomiting, with bleeding
Coughing, vomiting, after bleeding
Coughing, vomiting,

and bleeding...

Repeat 'til fade.

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Eяin Heяoin

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Leitwortstil. Beautiful. Crafted with an imagery melodious and tragic. Its as if a spiral of devolution unfolding before my eyes, the tongue is flabbergasted with the rhythmic festering pain.

I am moved.
this gave me the creeps. i don't really know why. it's beautiful, yes but it gave me shivers.

-citybuoy
OK I'm not much of a literature person so I don't know big words like you do. However, I do like poems and this one, well, let's just say interesting... :-)
@Red:

Ah, literary techniques. Most of the time though, I toy with my words too much that I don't stick to the technique that I was aiming for.

Still, I'm glad you were moved. :)
@Nyl:

Why posting semi-anonymously? Hmm, was this because blogger was blocked in your office? Sucks!

And yes, the literal bleeding lines were really morbid. I like that. Hee.
@Menthos:

Oh, you don't need to know big words in order to write what you feel. I am just a fan of exaggerations, that is why.

Thanks for liking, though. :)

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Vice Versa, Almost

Murdered toes with calloused brows
Calloused toes with murdered brows

Threatening dildos
amidst
Hypertonic coitus

A conniving flapper
against
A pleasure seeker

Putrid pills after spoiled syrup
Spoiled days after putrid nights

Coughing, vomiting, with bleeding
Coughing, vomiting, after bleeding
Coughing, vomiting,

and bleeding...

Repeat 'til fade.

6 comments:

  1. Leitwortstil. Beautiful. Crafted with an imagery melodious and tragic. Its as if a spiral of devolution unfolding before my eyes, the tongue is flabbergasted with the rhythmic festering pain.

    I am moved.

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  2. this gave me the creeps. i don't really know why. it's beautiful, yes but it gave me shivers.

    -citybuoy

    ReplyDelete
  3. OK I'm not much of a literature person so I don't know big words like you do. However, I do like poems and this one, well, let's just say interesting... :-)

    ReplyDelete
  4. @Red:

    Ah, literary techniques. Most of the time though, I toy with my words too much that I don't stick to the technique that I was aiming for.

    Still, I'm glad you were moved. :)

    ReplyDelete
  5. @Nyl:

    Why posting semi-anonymously? Hmm, was this because blogger was blocked in your office? Sucks!

    And yes, the literal bleeding lines were really morbid. I like that. Hee.

    ReplyDelete
  6. @Menthos:

    Oh, you don't need to know big words in order to write what you feel. I am just a fan of exaggerations, that is why.

    Thanks for liking, though. :)

    ReplyDelete